My God this is good.
The repetition is fantabulous. Plus the image of, "screaming," it provokes is delightful.
The depiction of Austria so desprate and loseing all of his, "couth," and in a sense, "diginity," is so harrowing...Urgg I just love it.
And you describe both of their, "nakedness," so beautifully. Of course of I don't mean, "nakedness," physically but emotionally both are naked and I love how you conveyed that.
I'm sorry I'll probably have more to say but I'm kinda at a loss of words at the moment at how amazing it is.

BTW war Austria is hawt..mmmmm so manly yet so.. mmmm